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写作任务二的例题: Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

起始句: “Nowadays it is very common to read about this kind of measure in the newspapers…”

我们AEHelp问, 请问这个hook哪部分是错误的?


这不会是个好的起始句因为, 他的内容太少了. 意思就是, 这句话讲了等于没讲.

起始句说道”common to read about in newspapers”, 其实并不完全是正确的. (因为, 您不会经常在报纸上看到它们) 实际上, 报纸上很少会报导关于这类的事情.当然, 这不否决问题的重要性!

我们的建议是, 如果要写一个好的起始句, 试试想点比较有趣或是使人注意的句子. 总的来说, 说点会对您的回答有帮助的.


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